I am a bit crazy here, my work is ending in couple of days. Tomorrow I am going to New York for an interview. Uncertainty is
a monster I hate big time. But that is one monster that is haunting me
for sometime now. Oh now I wonder how much I loved that monster in my
younger days.
There are a lot of things to
write but I am hitting zyphyr (a word I use for nothingness) where are
all these events leading me to. I usually feel a pattern in it all now
I just don’t understand. May be my senses are shutting down to zyphyr.
May be there is another time I realize, I am a phoenix.
This is a poem I wrote when someone I
was chatting with asked me what sort of husband I may become. Now I
wonder, Why the hell did I wrote this poem. May be because this is the
true me.
To My Bride.
I loved to see her as my bride,
And there she is standing,
With pride as my bride.
On this wedding day I promise you dear,
That the rest of my life remains just for you.
By the planets, stars and galaxies, I swear,
To carry you in my hands,
In the difficult paths of our life.
By the light of the day, I swear,
To make you the guiding ray of our life.
Until water dries away from oceans,
And the blue sky becomes dark and remain dark forever,
We know love will remain,
By the generations to come, I swear,
My love for you will fill the vacuum,
After all perishes away.
By the love you gave, I swear,
To preserve the sanctity of the individual in you.
Even if the unimaginable happens and takes you away,
I swear, rest of my life, I will live alone,
Until my soul meets yours.
By this wedding day, I swear,
To preserve the happiness of yours.
And by the happiness of this day,
We remember forever, I swear,
To perish away than change my words.
©RIAZAHAMMED.COM. This poem was released in LonelyPoet.Com early spring 1999.
Oh my…..keep penning beautiful words like this and I’LL marry you!
Coming back finally and stopping by here, only made me realize how much more I missed you than I even realized. You always awe me. Youre the greatest!!!
thank you i have to say thats one of my best. and your welcome. I love this poem…..it says all the things i feel for someone. THNKS!!! talk to ya later
Wow…just wow…
If only every husband would live to that poem, there would be a lot more happy families in the world…God bless you Mr. Poet. Have you ever considered getting your poems published? It would only make sense. I wish you luck in New York, and yes I will certainly pray for you. I believe that life depends on luck and on blessings. It helps to have God to fall back on, but it doesn’t hurt to have lady luck blasting a path for ya either. Like all ladies, she’s fickle. God will always be there for you…Hhhmmm…That’s an interesting concept.
Yes, insanity is always there waiting for you in the back of your brain. I’d have to say your insanity is a blessing. Perhaps your insanity keeps you sane…God bless Mr. Poet, and good luck.
well thanks…..im glad i finally got something good in one of my poems that i wrote………i really love how you help and tell me wahts good and whats wrong like honestly i love you for that………thanks…………but yeah when i had really written that poem i never really thought of you know crying when it rains bc no one would see your tears but now if i read that i would think that way because you read quotes that are like that but thanks though
wow
the book is GRAND. But me being a huge baby sobbed at the end like a sobbing loon. It doesn’t end happily, and I cannot wait for the next one…Although i do not know how Miss J.K is going to end it all in one book…I would think she would need 3-4 more…Or at least I hope..hehe..
see how much of a dork I am about it?
there is beauty in sentiment – and that shines here. an introspective look upon the writer perhaps or how the writer wishes to see themself. Nicely done.
~*NW*~
it is delightful to get to know you better, aw you rpics are not scary. you should see mine i choose Not to put on the internet. haha that is thebeauty of choice isnt it..
wot is the war against darkness i suppose it could be said. of course i udnerstand what you are saying- it is simply what most of us are thinking. the topic isnt that too contreverisal when people think logivally. it is terrorism vs. not. how tough of a decision could That be.
i live in georgia, usa. its not so nice a place, rather humid but i know im better off than many others so ill stop complaining.
poetic pictures, lovely thought isnt it. im still trying to decide what i think about a picture speaks a thousand words, and whether i even liek that or not. poetic words can be so very beautiful, its almost a shame to put a thousand words to waste.
sweet dreams for you- as always i loved reading your comment.
yours truly- fAe
Your words to me always make me feel warm and just smile from ear to ear. You are a blessing to know.
Ha ha! Thanks, I have this mind block where all faeries are awesome and should be respected!!!! Lol, yeah, I’m pretty crazy. She is sexy but hands off! Lol, again…
Sure thing for the words. I just wanted to help remind you that your never alone. Jeez, all these people on here love you. Whenever you feel sad just take a look at the comments people leave you and that should brighten you right back up again! You obviously make people feel good about themselves, and that’s a great gift and responsibility to posses. Ha ha…(Yes, I am sounding like a fortune cookie, but how about we pretend I don’t!) I’m glad to hear things went well in New York! What’s it like there? I’ve always wanted to go there, but seeing as how that cruise pretty much sapped all our vacation money…Huh, yeah…Anywho, I gotta go Mr. Poet. Bye!
Hmmm…maybe it’s just me, but I notice many women responding to your poem (Which is _very_ beautiful by the way) ^_^
From one poet to another: I admire your gift of words. I love visuals, and when I read your poems, I can see thing; you’re words are more alive.
Hey thanks for the comment. That poem was more out of frustration towards ignorant people more than me being uncomfortable towards myself. When I first realized my sexuality I was scared to death and I was in denial for about 3 years, but then I finally accepted myself and loved myself for who I am. The poem is kind of about that realization and about how I won’t let some people’s negative judgements of me break me down. So yea, thanks for reading my poetry always! Keep coming back, hopefully I’ll have another update soon. Nice poetry yourself.
~Lauren~
Oops, I just realized I left you a comment using my other xanga username, sorry lol. That was me ^^ krucial_key214.
Such tender and breathtaking words….
I wish you hope and the best of luck on your interview.
-Gia:)
that is really a sweet poem.
5 years only because I am a crazy mom and that will be around the time I will feel comfortable leaving my baby in the hands of someone else for so long. lol any sooner I know I wouldn’t be able to relax and enjoy myself.