Folded Hands.

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To all those who wished me luck and offered their blessings in getting
my visa extended my sincere thanks. In a record three days the United
States Citizenship And Immigration Services approved and extended my
visa. Yesterday I got the news from my new company guys and I am still
busy with work sorry for the delay in getting a happy news to you guys.
 Now like she said in one of her comments, this may sound
redundant but sure, I can’t stop saying my thanks to Sam Nolte for her
offering of every ounce of her luck for me. She though says she lives
for herself, sure is the most selfless teenager I have ever known. I
will thank her rest of my life who offered such support to a total
stranger whom she knew only through the internet. May all the best
things be showered upon her in every endeavor she ever takes. Thanks Mo
Cuishle.
  And to you all wow you are the most wonderful people I’ve ever
met. You all have the best of best in the fulfillment of your dreams.
Thanks everyone.

I posted a poem called “Reading Poems” last week here. This is a
variation of that poem it was written a day after that poem was
written, with the same thoughts in my mind.

Folded Hands.

Unfettered belief in mind about love,
Convincing beyond every reason,
With unfelt feelings made up in pursuit,
For a little comfort in loneliness.

Love is the light from the heart, un-flickering,
Turn away or have to walk away with eyes shut,
But, too bright is the truth of love,
Blinded too by thoughts about her in wonder.

Even when in the heart knowing,
Like the biography of her own life,
Everything in my words I mean,
Oh’ her eyes closed against her will in guilt,
When an image of mine her eyes delivered,
Deep into her mind embedded,
With a smile of my love,
As deep in her heart filled in,
Was another face seen in every bit of her life.

With folded hands I lie,
And life folded to a breath or two,
As no more reason known at all,
To breathe life without her in my life,
And no reason seen at all,
In seeing the light from another heart,
As the light of my love fade,
Deep into the folds of my heart.

17 Replies to “Folded Hands.”

  1. What wonderful news!!! I’m so happy you have your visa has been approved & extended. May it be just the beginning of good news & good luck to you.

    Beautiful piece of poetry. I especially liked these lines:

    Love is the light from the heart, un-flickering,
    Turn away or have to walk away with eyes shut.

  2. Usualy the US doesn’t make things too difficult for immigrants who follow the rules.

    I will read the poem later, currently my eyes wont focus correctly. I spent hours watching TV, Olympics kick ass.

  3. Hello, LP — this is a touching poem! Love=light from the heart=too bright truth…Wow!! Nice language! Hands folded, life folded, fold of heart — I love the way you carried the folding metaphor throughout. So happy to hear things are working out for you. All the best, Lah.

  4. hey there… congrats! im happy to hear about ur good news. that’s rili great news. now, u dont have to worry about it 🙂 neways, love the poem up there… ur pieces always touch the right spot…

    btw, thanks for the comment. love it!

  5. Omg! Thinkin’ about me?

    Currently Listening
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    By Elton John
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    lol!

    I’ve been up to nothing, school, sex, drugs lol kidding!! Umm what else. Projects, yes, I love projects!!

    -Emily

  6. Congrats on the good news!

    Your writing was a wonderful as always. You seem to touch the spirit with your words. The light truly does not flicker when tis true love.

    Happy Valentine’s Day!!
    ♥TBR

  7. IRT~no thanks needed…eye too have a birthday near a holiday…so eye understand when people forget to say “happy birthday” thought eye just reach out and say “hey hey its your birthday” *does the birthday dance* if eye could eye give you a cupcake with a candle on it hehehe……

    much love and care to you and yours

    Ami’Nos

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